Remember the first part of my "wonderful" () short story Atonement that I put on here? well this is basically that as the first half, with the second half giving it an ending. I had to submit a short story for English, and the ideas I have for Atonement were just too long for me to do it and meet the deadline, so I did this. I'm farily happy with it, but it may lose momentum at then end, which is SHIT .

You don't have to have read Atonement part 1 to get this at all, it's a different story all together basically. Hoping to carry on with Atonment soon, just to bore the pants off you guys

So please tell me what you think your comments are always very much appreciated! and reallysorry for rambling and this one being so long, but please let me know what you think if you have time to read it